Collaborative Story part 3

I've updated our collaborative story that we have been working on. I hope you don't mind but I've tried to make it a little less confusing and I've corrected some spelling and grammatical issues. By no means is this perfect, but I think we have an interesting little story here; so I've kept the ball rolling let's see where we go now.


It was a beautiful sunny day when I spotted the most shocking thing I'd ever seen. Someone had thrown away 2 perfectly good chicken tacos. Somehow that beautiful sunny day took a turn for the worse; because just as I was about to make the decision, “should I eat these out of the trash or not?” A man with a red suit and white beard swept in and stole my chicken Taco's out of my trash covered hand. Saying, "Ha, Ha, Ha, (you know that saying Ho! Ho! Ho! is politically incorrect now!) these are my chicken tacos! Rudolph left them for me"


“But wait”, said the man in the red suit, “Is it chicken or does it just taste like chicken?” "Of course it’s chicken, shouted the man with the trash covered hand, do you think I would climb into the trash to get just ANYTHING?!" And, I know it was clean trash...Why was it clean trash? I never came down with food poisoning or any other disease.”


So just as the man in the red suit was about to devour the chicken tacos, out from the bushes popped Pastor Kris tackling the man in the red suit and shouting, “No tacos for you red suit man, these are...mine all mine!!!!!!!!!!!”


As a camouflaged Pastor Kris tackled the man in the red suit, out popped a hysterical little elf and a reindeer foaming at the mouth. The mad little elf jumped on the back of the reindeer and said, “Hi Ho Marv, we are going to teach Preacher Boy a lesson about tackling. At that time God spoke to the angry preacher man and warned him of his pending judgment if he did not repent of his chicken-taco-hogging ways.


Just as the reindeer and elf were about to leap into action - Marv went spread eagle sliding across the ice and into a tree. Marv, the reindeer, thought while sliding into the tree, “if only I had not skipped that lesson on how to slide on ice while trying to teach a preacher boy a lesson about tackling”. The reindeer and elf hit the tree and said, "That's gonna leave a mark. Hey Marv is the tree all right?" to which Marv replied, “Yes, the tree is fine, but get me a rope, the ice makes it difficult to move around with these skis on.”


As the angry little elf grabbed the rope, the skis popped off and the man with the red suit found himself on skis... away went the man in the red suit and away went the tacos... the end? Or could it end that easily? Remember the Easter bunny is lurking.


Sure enough, peering behind a bush was the Easter Bunny. With a sly smile and a sinister laugh he hopped on his Polaris snowmobile and tore off after the red suited man and the chicken tacos shouting...